Cater and Rebecca's Narrative

Here is a narrative using PuppetPals made by Rebecca and Carter about a trip to the zoo.

Show (don't tell)

Here is a video we made of our examples using show (don't tell). Can you guess what feelings we are describing? 

100 WC #26

Here are our responses to last week's 100 Word Challenge. The prompt was, as they turned the corner. The learners in the Writing Club have come up with some very creative pieces of writing. 

Complex Sentences #Visible Learning

Here is a video about complex sentences made by Carter, Avantika and Rebecca.

100 WC Week #23

Last week we took part in the 100 Word Challenge. This picture was the prompt for the week. We had to write 100 words about this image.

Here are the results:

Fanboys #Visiblelearning

Avantika, Carter and Rebecca have shared their learning about the FANBOYS by making a video. They thought of some great ways to present their ideas. Their goal was to make a video that their peers could learn from. Here it is:

More Simple Sentences

One of our tasks during Writing Club today was to write a simple sentence about this picture. We had to add detail to our sentences.

Here are our sentences:

Linda: The pesky possum is trapped on the wooden fence.

Shayal: The little pest was trapped by a vicious little dog.

Maleehah: The furry possum is trapped on a wooden fence.

Carter: The dog is hungry.

Avantika: The dog looks very angry.

Rebecca: The possum is trying to get down.

Mercy: The ugly possum is looking down at the mischievous dog.

Armaan: The dog is trying to catch the possum.

David: The possum might dive over the fence.

John: The dog is reaching for the possum.

Adam: The fluffy possum didn't know there was a fence.

Jordan: The fierce dog wanted to catch the fluffy possum.