John's Narrative

John has used iMovie to publish the narrative he wrote based on this image:

Show (don't tell) 2

Here is the second video of our examples of using the writing technique, show (don't tell). See if you can guess what feeling we are describing before the time runs out. 

100 WC #26

Here are our responses to last week's 100 Word Challenge. The prompt was, as they turned the corner. The learners in the Writing Club have come up with some very creative pieces of writing. 

Subordinating Conjunctions

Here are some slides we have made that show how to use subordinating conjunctions in complex sentences.

100 WC Week #23

Last week we took part in the 100 Word Challenge. This picture was the prompt for the week. We had to write 100 words about this image.

Here are the results:

More Simple Sentences

One of our tasks during Writing Club today was to write a simple sentence about this picture. We had to add detail to our sentences.

Here are our sentences:

Linda: The pesky possum is trapped on the wooden fence.

Shayal: The little pest was trapped by a vicious little dog.

Maleehah: The furry possum is trapped on a wooden fence.

Carter: The dog is hungry.

Avantika: The dog looks very angry.

Rebecca: The possum is trying to get down.

Mercy: The ugly possum is looking down at the mischievous dog.

Armaan: The dog is trying to catch the possum.

David: The possum might dive over the fence.

John: The dog is reaching for the possum.

Adam: The fluffy possum didn't know there was a fence.

Jordan: The fierce dog wanted to catch the fluffy possum. 

Introducing John

John loves being in the school band. Here is a paragraph from his autobiography.

John from Savelina Lepou on Vimeo.