We have been studying a poem by Frank Kendon called The Looker-on.
Using the same structure, we decided to have a go at writing about our environment. Each group chose a place around the school. They sat down and took observational notes. They used their senses to describe what was around them. Here are some of the results. Can you guess what part of the school they are writing about?
Here is Caleb's poem:
Here is So'otaga's poem:
Here is a poem by Sophie:
6 comments:
Alysah said...
great job doing poems you guys should become a children's, story, poem writers
wow i love your poems great one so'otanga
good work you both you great work
good talking
i love your comment guys thanks for the support.
Thx for ur comments guys
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